Dk. Mes animations. 08/06/2009 - expert?

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Par tout salut, moi ici le débutant. Comment vous pensez, quel mon rang ? Moi de la Russie, c'est pourquoi je ne sais pas communiquer en français. Si pouvez, cela, s'il vous plaît, écrivez les commentaires en anglais ou sur le Russe, bien ? But you can speak on French!!!


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Comment and rate, please :D

Dernière édition par Dk le Lun 8 Juin 2009 - 9:51, édité 13 fois

Hey, thanks all for the coments :D
Merci à vous pour vos commentaires. Mais serait bien, si vous avez critiqué un peu mes animations pour que je connaisse, sur quoi je dois travailler.

Alors je critique =D
Tes animations sont magnifiques ! Tu n'as plus grand chose à apprendre sauf quelques effets manquants et des décors... Pas très compliqués...
De plus dans ta nouvelle, lorsque le mec passe sur son overboard au milieu de l'écran. Il est raide... Tout raide... T_T
Ou du moins on dirait... ^^

T'as vu ? J'ai écrit en russe, c'est plus facile pour toi je pense =)


Затем я критикую = D Ваши мультипликации великолепны! Вы делаете не много должен изучать больше кроме некоторых эффекты отсутствия и художественные оформления (наборы)... очень не сложный...
Кроме того в вашем сообщении (короткая история), когда парень проходит на его за борт в середине экрана. Он (это) жесток... Весьма жесткий... T _ T
Или по крайней мере мы будем говорить ^^

Видел вас? Я написал по-русски, это более легче для вас я думаю =)

Ouyeah !
Your last rock's !
Very good game guy.

His preparation looks bad. Seriously, do you think it's possible to do it this way?

Pepper

No expert for me. It's short and as sergeant pepper say his preparation looks bad. (I don't speak english very well, I'm sorry :(suspect):)

your animations are very good and very very beautiful ! I' Think you can go expert!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! x)
(Sorry, I' think my english is bad xD)

Animation! Expert?

Eh bien ! ton animation est super ! Tu vaux expert, mais tes animations sont trop courte !

Eh bien ! Your animation it' very good ! Expert, but your animation are short
Good blood

Ну! ваш анимации велик! Эксперт! Но ваши анимации, слишком короткий!
Кровь хорошо сделали !

Nice blood. But, the reaction (almost the end) is failed or not realistic :c ...

Le merci bien pour les commentaires! Maintenant je tâcherai plus!

I dunno what you have to do to be an expert, so, I can't tell you if you can be upgraded. (sooooooooorry)

This animation is very good. The blood is very realistic and it's very good when the stick is falling down. (I think I've made an error, but where ? :(hein?): )

So, you are in the good way. Don't give up !

He's happy :winkanim:
It's very good, nive move. When a long animation ?

http://depositfiles.com/files/b4z674sd2

Here is a preview to the long animation :D Only the .piv

Ah !
Good ! I wait with impatience :winkanim:
For me, with Obisam37, you are the next expert :(top):

Wohah ! You are almost expert oO ! Good mouvements and very nice fluidity. I love your run <3 ! I don't understand why you are here ...

You are Expert ... It's so Wonderfull ... Amazing, epic, Wooow !
It's just a question of Time before your Upgrade !

Ease a little more, he's all stiffy while running.
We'd enjoy a better reaction from him, when falling down from a building... But your major poroblem is that your characters are very stiffy.
Work on that, and we'll discuss of your level...

Pepper

Merci bien pour les commentaires, je les estime beaucoup.

Nice move cam guy.
But your effect's not very difficult to realise...
I think you can't go expert for the moment.

Good game.

um Thank you, I know that effects are so simple, I just don't try to make them good.